Blog 35
The purpose of this paper is to relate to my audience. I don’t want my audience to think that I feel that I’m above them, or that I am nothing similar to them. After a viewer reads my paper, they will understand that we’re all in a similar situation and that it’s ok to feel stressed out due to the pressure of your parents. I want someone to read my article and think, this girl knows exactly how I am feeling right now and that maybe it’s ok to feel stressed out an maybe a little over whelmed. Also I want people to fell calmer after reading this, hopefully they will notice that there are solutions to this feeling of stress and pressure. When my paper is finished, I hope to offer up a few techniques to dealing with stress. I hope that my readers will read these techniques and take them seriously so that they can cope with the pressures they have been put under too. Not only is article for other people’s purposes, but also for myself. I feel constant pressure daily to perform well in school, and this article can be an outlet for my feelings. Overall, I would like y paper to be instructive and helpful to not only myself, but also the audience that this goes out to. I hope that my article will be published so that maybe, some stressed out OSU freshman will read this article and know that there are other people in this world who are feeling the same way as them.
That is a really great idea. I like how you are going to offer techniques to help deal with stress.
ReplyDeleteThere is a lot of pressure on college students and young people in general right now. I would say maybe more so than in the past. Things have become more complex in our industrialized society. Sounds like a paper that could have a positive impact.
ReplyDeleteYou are taking on the same atitude as me. I am trying to let my readers be aware that they are not alone. I am not discussing stress in my article but I am discussing something very common in college life, as are you. I think it is good to let the readers know that there is someone else out there just like them to make them feel a little at ease in their difficult time away at college.
ReplyDeleteThat's a unique way of considering your purpose, it makes me think of my own paper. I always just use relating to my audience as a tool to acheiving my purpose, not as the purpose itself. Thanks for the perspective!
ReplyDeleteOh, and this is a good idea. :)
This is an awesome topic and relates to almost everyone. I know that I am a very stressed person and college has not helped. I think that providing tips is a good idea to help make the reader feel more relaxed.
ReplyDeletethanks guys for all the support! :)
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